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Got my first OU assignment back in the post today. The verdict seems to be basically pretty good but needs to use more commas, be more explicit about defining concepts and terms and refer back to the evidence more. I guess my previous academic writing was in philosophy where mostly you directly quoted or you didn't so I find it a bit more awkward to get into the social science mode where you also reference results you're describing in the text at the point you use them (I just had a sources list at the end instead). Still, overall, I get a smiley face, which is good.